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about pity feeling of daily life
elder brothers affection is described by showing a chain of events & scenes on his brothers birthday
as the unemployment is quite serious, the daily life, which is affected by that, is shown
written concerning the use of some important conjunctions, relatives and participles
more focused on the use of standard grammar rather than vocabulary and idiom
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My Brothers Birthday
- 12th of May, 2009 -

The day before yesterday was my younger brothers birthday. I was deeply thinking of giving him a present, but no money. - (omitted) - They are too young to do something for themselves, but I couldnt help them enough. They couldnt enjoy their childhood, standing the familys poverty, being hit by their terrible father.

Fortunately I managed to sell one of my goods. I earned around 20,000 won for it. That was an old part of my computer. That was still not enough to buy something good for him. Mostly presents are expensive, which means other cheaper things are almost rubbish. - (omitted) - However, I was wrong. He was ill, having cold. He didnt eat even his birthday cake. He didnt. We drank some cups of beer for a while with the terrible. It couldnt be nice.

Next day I went home. Im not living there any more, but only my mother and the siblings. The step-father, who I used to call dad, had left out after fighting with mother. It had been¡¦(»ý·«)
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